# HG changeset patch
# User Jordi Gutiérrez Hermoso <jordigh@octave.org>
# Date 1394379590 14400
# Node ID c657209f840b760f51907ebbdd4b6a251eadd267
# Parent  389af285236faf0c41841e4b699459e05521147e
Minor rewordings

diff -r 389af285236f -r c657209f840b talk.tex
--- a/talk.tex	Sun Mar 09 11:39:35 2014 -0400
+++ b/talk.tex	Sun Mar 09 11:39:50 2014 -0400
@@ -25,7 +25,7 @@
 
 
 \title{Changeset Evolution in Mercurial}
-\subtitle{Edit commits collaboratively!}
+\subtitle{Edit commits as a team!}
 \date{}
 
 %%% END METADATA%%%
@@ -200,7 +200,7 @@
       \item
       Basically, automatically fixes any problems
       \item
-      Rebases back to upstream and more!
+      recovers from upstream rebase (solves Problem 1)
     \end{itemize}
   \end{center}
 \end{frame}
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@
 
 \begin{frame}
   \begin{center}
-    Let's see evolve in action!
+    Let's see Evolve in action!
 
     \fontsize{68}{80}\selectfont \lefthand
   \end{center}